Fellow PUA's lets play a game!

[Frankie D]

So guys i got this idea. Lets play a game. Im going to post a craigslist add and i want to see comments on what these AFC chumps are doing wrong. This is good practice on how we can avoid the same pitfalls

First up

http://newyork.craigslist.org/stn/m4w/470666512.html

Heres the text

The only really great guy on this site looking for a special girl!!! - 32

"Hello..I am 5'5 130lbs brown hair and brown eyes...Everyone I know has found their soulmate..however I am still single and cant find the right girl. I am a really good guy with a great sense of humor. I am honest and genuine 100%. I am not a guy who would cheat on a girl or play any type of immature games. I am funny and quirky and easy going. I have alot of interests including sports, and music, and movies, and broadway shows, and lounges, and cafes, and traveling, and day trips, and skiing, going to the zoo is cool, eating out in new restaurants, or just staying home and watching Tv or a movie. I am a romantic guy and just wanna find a great girl to spend my time with. Email me back if interested. I am looking for a girl that has a great sense of humor, is sincere, and honest, and caring, and family oriented, and not afraid to be herself...isnt to serious...easy going...laughs alot...can take a joke..is a little spunky..or maybe quirky...hope to hear from ya! "

Okay go!

[ganglord]

First thing I see is the guy's enter key is broken. It's hard to read and I can tell that before I even start reading it.

AFCness - soulmate, his DHVs are that he's Mr. Niceguy and none of his interests are unique.

He opened with a DLV in giving his height at 5'5". Most women are not even going to read past that. He can overcome that height but in the online game he has already lost to all the guys on CL who are 5'10"+ which is most of them.

This post is basically taken from the "How to get no responses on CL" template.

I don't do online game anymore because it's a lot of work, offers little in return and just doesn't compare to picking a woman that you can see from head to toe, see her face, her body language, her style, etc.

What I do know is that basically your ad is supposed to be WAY over the top to the point where the women that read it are bordering on disbelief that you're for real.