Critique my POF profile?

[Scoundrel]

Have a look at my profile and let me know what you guys think. Also, is it a good thing to have a few pics with hotties in my profile or should I take them out?

http://www.plentyoffish.com/member2530166.htm

[Eyez]

I think it's good. And you can leave the pics with girls,it's a plus. As for the pics. I think the third pic would be a good default pic. The first is kind of blurry. And I hate to say this,but that's the only way you can stand out,when they're searching through thousands of profiles. When they're searching through,they go to the pics with no shirts,then to the great pics. If it's a bad pic,you'll most likely get skimmed over. Just some tips.

But it's good so far.

[stealth88]

The pics with you and other chicks are great to have in there, but you have too many in my opinion. You don't want to come off as a total player...that will turn too many women off. So maybe leave two of the best ones in there and remove the rest.

I'm not sure about the one with you squeezing the chick's tits...it shows you are playful, but also makes you look a bit too deviant right off the bat. I think it would turn a lot of women off.

But the waterskiing and guitar pics are excellent...suggests you are artsy and well-rounded, and adventurous.

I'm not sure if you are looking for a long term relationship on there, but if not, I would change the "does not want children" to "no answer" if that's an option. A lot of women may want kids eventually and you don't want to exclude them...it also may make you look kind of "cold" if you don't want kids. I don't want any either, but I try to avoid that topic with women I'm talking to for the first time.

Well I'm no pro but those are my honest thoughts, so take them for what they are worth....just trying to help.

I know a few people who have hooked up off POF...I need to make a profile myself considering it's free. I usually focus on Myspace though, but good to have as much out there as possible.

[Scoundrel]

Thanks for the input guys. It's helped a lot. POF also has a forum for profile reviews and the women in there LOVED me.

Cheers
~Scoundrel~