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Godhand
01-23-2007, 02:42 PM
I've revamped my PeopleMeet.com dating profile several times since I last posted it on the MM forum. I got rid of the banal content and wittled most of the unnecessary datails out of it. I also took out alot of the negative shit (disqualifyers, tough standards, etc). I've been getting a lot more messages now. I recently tried to up the ante by adding a mild amount of NLP patterns to the mix. The only problem is that I am stumped when it comes to the opener. I want to use some NLP in the opener, but I don't want to lead off with a question. Most weasle phrases that I've memorized are question form. I want to lead with a statement that uses a non-question weasle phrase and a trance word or two, that doesn't seem wierd. Any advice would be appreciated. Below is my profile text:

A little about me...
I'm a single, educated, and successful male of Liberian and Madagascan heritage that enjoys living and experiencing life. Rather than bore you with the typical paragraph of postitive qualities that most guys on here list, I'll let you get to know me as we conversate. Don't be shy. At the very least, we can be friends. *LOL*

What are you looking for in a partner?
Women who are smart, honest, and know how to have a good time. I'm looking for an emotionally mature woman that can be a good friend first, then a girlfriend second. I want to make sure that I'm attracted to your personality and not just your physical appearance. I'm always open to new friends, but I'm selective about who I get into committed relationships with.

I'd just like to add...
When you contact me, allow yourself to relax and be your true fun-loving self. You will come to find that I'm easy to talk to. Due to the huge amount of messages in my inbox, I do require a picture and a description on your page unless you are seeking a pen pal or email me a description and/or picture. When I selected "Looking for a casual relationship" it was only because I was limited to one choice. I'm open to the possibility of all of the selectable options (from pen pals to a serious relationship), depending on the level of connection.

tannhauser
01-23-2007, 04:30 PM
I've revamped my PeopleMeet.com dating profile several times since I last posted it on the MM forum. I got rid of the banal content and wittled most of the unnecessary datails out of it. I also took out alot of the negative shit (disqualifyers, tough standards, etc). I've been getting a lot more messages now. I recently tried to up the ante by adding a mild amount of NLP patterns to the mix. The only problem is that I am stumped when it comes to the opener. I want to use some NLP in the opener, but I don't want to lead off with a question. Most weasle phrases that I've memorized are question form. I want to lead with a statement that uses a non-question weasle phrase and a trance word or two, that doesn't seem wierd. Any advice would be appreciated. Below is my profile text:

A little about me...
I'm a single, educated, and successful male of Liberian and Madagascan heritage that enjoys living and experiencing life. Rather than bore you with the typical paragraph of postitive qualities that most guys on here list, I'll let you get to know me as we conversate. Don't be shy. At the very least, we can be friends. *LOL*

is conversate a word? sounds like something "the ladies man" would say.

yep, you need something as your profile is a list of boring statements. you need to capture these hot babes imaginations and lead them into whatever state you desire....

I would go with....
**** Imagine.....meeting a man who wants to enjoy living and experiencing life to its fullest. How will it feel when you meet a man that you can relax with, feel comfort with and attraction for...and be your true fun loving self? if you can imagine yourself getting to know a well educated, succesfull, liberian/madagascarian man, and sharing what life has to offer, make sure you include a photo with your response. It isn't that I care about how you look...but, have you ever just looked at someone and right away....you feel a instantaneous connection with this person? Have you ever seen someone and instantly, you feel like you need to get to know this guy better?
As your sitting at your computer, reading this, and wondering if you should repy, i should let you know that I appreciate good looks, but I am more interested in a woman with a strong spirit and a great outlook on life.***

What are you looking for in a partner?
Women who are smart, honest, and know how to have a good time. I'm looking for an emotionally mature woman that can be a good friend first, then a girlfriend second. I want to make sure that I'm attracted to your personality and not just your physical appearance. I'm always open to new friends, but I'm selective about who I get into committed relationships with.

****I am looking for a smart and honest women. A women who knows that it is good to be friends as well as lovers...isn't it? like I said above- good looks are common, inner beauty is much harder to find.

R. Tannhauser esq

you know I am much better at meta model than I am at milton model. damn.
the thing about trance words is that you really need to know her trance words to use them effectively. "generic" trancewords aren't as good.

Godhand
01-23-2007, 05:57 PM
You are the man, Tannhauser. If this was Stylelife, I'd give you a rep point.:)

tannhauser
01-23-2007, 06:07 PM
one more little trick I forgot to mention:

when you use embedded commands put an extra space before it. it is subtle but the subconcious picks up on it.

ex: one of the things you'll appreciate when you use NLP, is that your life will change in ways you never even imagined...and when you consider whether or not you want to send me money, for this great knowledge...imagine how good it will feel when you give Tannhauser your money.

embedded commands above:
use NLP
your life will change
you want to send me money
give tannhauser your money
s
ee the way the space analog marks out the commands. just don't overdo it or you will look like a bad typer.