Palm reading:'the Matrix line' - untested, critique appreciated

[JCode]

You take the HB's hand and say excitedly:
Wow! I've heard of this.. but I have never seen this in real..
HB: What?? What do you mean..??
PUA: You have.. this line.. a Matrix line/Neo line (sounding little serious).
HB: What is a matrix line/Neo line?
PUA: It means.. that like Neo, the main character in the Matrix movie. you also.. are very special (smiling and making it seem like a compliment)
HB: Woow, really?! What do you mean by that?
(up to this point hold the hand and use your finger to draw the line etc and now put her hand away)
PUA: Just like Neo can see the bullets.. in slow motion.. you also tend to think in slow motion.. (saying little serious)
HB: Huh?
PUA: It's basically a idiot line (with a little smile at the end).

I thought of this to use as kino escalation and to get this playful vibe around you two. The outcome I'm looking for is laughter and possibly a playful punch on the shoulder.
If the girl takes it too serious, you could say "You're so cute" and give her a hug (then say "Get off me" and push her away).

I haven't been able to field test this yet so I've no idea if this works, so critique and suggestions to improve this are appreciated.

[Smooyth]

Bit too agressive don't ya think "idiot like".. I would say "It's a (in patronising voice) slow persons line"..

wait, and they be like " do you get it?" lol

- Smooyth -

[KevinPUA]

Haha "Idiot Line" ;D
Hm? Retarted line would sound much better (:
"See this line? It's the Retarted Line.. It means your Retarted"