You've Hijacked my Brain! routine

[FlavA]

This is a routine I created when I was in the shower lmao..actually this is a variation of a mystery routine I saw in one of the annihilation method routines. This routine is based on the “You’ve hijacked my brain” campaign and should be used when in comfort. I use this routine usually over the phone when setting up comfort over the time bridge. I then proceed to set up a date. Tell me what you guys think of it.

PUA: You suck!

HB: why, what happened? Blah blah

PUA: ok heres what happened, I was sitting in my car in the middle of traffic this afternoon at a red light, and you were just someone I was thinking about at that moment you know I don’t want you to get a big head or anything but I just wanted to see what you were up to and what u were doing at the time..u know I was just curious about you. But you know what really pissed me off? When I went to grab my phone to call you up, it was completely dead! So I hope you were doing something really boring, cuz I didn’t want to miss out on anything!

-FlavA

[Sway]

This is Mystery's routine with some of the words changed. What exactly did you... "create"??

[FlavA]

This is Mystery's routine with some of the words changed. What exactly did you... "create"??

its a variation son, like i said i was in the shower just thinking about routines when i thought about the structure of the mystery routine and from there "created" a variation.

-FlavA

[Metal_Slug]

its always funny to me how two ppl are similar in someways.
all my routines and stuff that ive really COME UP with was in the shower.

i member once i sat down to think of an original opener i wanted to try b4 i went out... and im like fuck it (cuz i had a brain block) so i took a shower and lo-behold i member coming up with so many i had to go grab a pen and write the shit down.

now i lost that paper.. haha oh well.

[Sway]

its a variation son, like i said i was in the shower just thinking about routines when i thought about the structure of the mystery routine and from there "created" a variation.

-FlavA

If you say so, gramps.

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whats mystery's version of this?

[MrEsquire]

I like what you did there. Innovation typically consists one of three things: 1) creating something new; 2) modifying something; or 3) finding a new use for something that already exists.

You did #2 above. Instead of creating a brand-new routine, you took an existing structure and modified it to suit you. Not only do I not have a problem with that, but it an efficient and smart way to expand your routine stack.

Now for my recommendation:
I'd take out the part, "cuz I didn’t want to miss out on anything!" I can't exactly put my finger on it, but it just doesn't seem right. Maybe being just a little too needy? I think inserting a small pause, then finishing with "So I hope you were doing something really boring", would work better.

[DrDexter]

It calls to mind that sugary Aerosmith song.